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A Little Sand Remains

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Father,
    I've seen the hour glass and it's running out of sand
Please help me Father, to tell them about the end
forgive me Lord, for this watchman has not watched
I've idled away my time when I should have sat on the wall
so many are decieved
they eat, they drink and they're merry
no more concerned that the Bridegroom's appearance is so near
most of all cleanse me, for my life must be Your voice
let my steps lead them Your way
Father they have no clue that its You who breathes in them
with the opening of Your lips..the wind blows

Oh God stir us in to fasting and prayer
Let us sacrifice for the sake of Your lost sheep
Wash me in the Blood of Jesus
Make me pure in Your sight
Keep me still until I'm white as snow
then take me into the Holy of Holies
burden my heart for Your prodicals, Your lost ones
Let me love them enough to tell them...

Time is running out
I see the hour glass....it's almost out of sand...time is running out
time is running out
Wake up all ye people!!!
The sound of the Bridegroom's entrance is getting louder
You can almost hear the swishing of His footsteps in the isle

A little Sand Remains...




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This one was especially hard to write because I wanted it to totally come from my heart. I didn't want just cliches and predictable thoughts. So this is what spilled out!

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  • soulfultia gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    Well you spilled some awesome poetry, this carries your wonderful spirit within the lines A sweet poet you are! ~Tia


  • Tam
    November 11, 2007
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    I had to return to this beauty...

    for this is poetry at it's best...
    Blessings! Tammy


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      November 11, 2007

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      Tammy you are my best AP friend!!! Thank you so much for the re-visit, on my write
      GBY
      SilverButterfly


  • Samplette gold member
    November 10, 2007

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    "Time is running out
    I see the hour glass....it's almost out of sand" How true that is. A wonderful and heartfelt write. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • astralshepherd gold member
    November 6, 2007

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    a wonderful poetic prayer so obviously heart felt and i can see why it would be so difficult to write but you did well here, i think.

    blessings and best wishes,

    ~r.


  • Frogzter gold member
    November 6, 2007

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    This is most heartfelt and true... I see nothing cliche about it all. A very good awakening for anyone who reads it! Thanks for sharing and best wishes! Everyone who takes the time to enter this contest is a winner already!

    Blessings,

    Frogz~


  • He Is My Lighthouse
    November 4, 2007
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    Amazing and beautiful and so so true.

  • Figaro
    November 1, 2007
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    Beautiful, and a very powerful prayer.


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      November 1, 2007
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      Thank you Figaro! your comment is very much appreciated

      GBY
      SilverButterfly

  • Tam
    October 27, 2007

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    oh my beautiful butterfly!

    Let me love them enough to tell them...

    this is such an outpouring of your sweet and loving heart...I could weep at the sight of this deeply moving prayer that seeps into the soul of each reader blessed enough to witness your words of faith.
    Such a love should be shared...and you are telling many with your lovely prayer here...
    I am honored and humbled to find this amazing and much needed prayer before my eyes...
    YOU ARE A JEWEL BUTTERFLY...
    spread your light and love...
    it is your calling!
    May peace always flutter 'neath your delicate wings...
    Blessings! Tammy

    Thank you for the example of goodness and faith I always witness in you!

    • SilverButterfly gold member
      October 27, 2007
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      Tammy you are my lifter-upper!!!You always send me sweet encouragement and I treasure your comments like gold

      GBY
      SilverButterfly


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 25, 2007

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    An excellent, earnest prayer. L9, typo? cleanse?

    "Father they have no clue that its You who breathes in them
    with the opening of Your lips..the wind blows"

    Beautiful lines. A strong, brave prayer. May it be answered.

    • SilverButterfly gold member
      October 25, 2007
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      Thank you for reading my poem"A Little Sand Remains". I appreciate you spotting the typo!!!!


      GBY
      SilverButterfly

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