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Cutting

Marks that are burning in my skin,
fluttering away thoughts of sadness.
I can't smile once I see me arm shaking,
but I stop to think otherwise.

I feel the need to do this,
but my body is dying slowly.
My mind is in a wreak and can't think,
my soul drowning in mistakes.

Happiness is just around the corner,
I know the feeling right there in my heart.
It pumps harder as the blade reaches skin,
red blushes as the blood comes slipping out.

I didn't want to do this,
I swear the world around me.
Don't make this harder than it already is,
a broken body will just crumble anyway.

So I will fade soon enough for the joy of pain,
slipping away into nothingness.
I will fade into the background,
and nothing else will be said.

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  • Purple-Meow
    October 24, 2007
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    wow this is really stong i like this write alot
    very good luck in my contest