A New Dawning.

In portals, speaks the wisdom
of old verses new;
Fragmented times hidden
behind mantels of misery
awaiting the rise of the
new world in all it's glory;
Newness filters slowly,
gaining strength through weaknesses redressed;
A new dawning emerges, strengthening
resolutions of a better day, a new begining.

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Artwork; Viona.

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A contest entry

Picture Prompt/ 10 Entries/10 Lines or Less by mysticstorm. 475 points, ended October 24, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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jcat
November 29, 2007

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Gorgeous piece you have penned here... Now if only we could learn to listen to the wisdom of old instead of always thinking that the truth can only be found in today.. Maybe the future holds all the answers of a beautiful new beginning???
islekine
November 18, 2007
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This is really a wonderful write!
I am an eternal optimist....this is my kind of poem!
Write on!
*PEACE*
- cutiepie
  November 18, 2007
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  Lol...I also strive to be optimistic. Thank you for your kindness as always, very much appreciated
mysticstorm
October 24, 2007

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Very well done. Nice and deep, strong in meaning and the future.
Yes there is a new dawn coming, will we be a part of it? Creative and alluring.
Thank you for entering.
Love
UnchartedPoet
October 24, 2007

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This is good, love the mystery of what is to come. Good write, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing your work.

Jen
- cutiepie
  October 24, 2007
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  Thank you Jen, the picture prompt was amazing...delighted that you enjoyed it