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Wishful Thinking

Wishful thinking,
is all there is
when years roll by,
no longer a kid;

when once
young love was passionate and true,
as time goes on,
it's no-longer blue;

Hot love,
they say is the 'in" thing
where parteners change,
those divorces begin;

So give me heart and soul
that's best,
and let the "time" test
do the rest;

So am I "wishful"
in my old age,
Oh no sir,
I can write... a page....;)

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  • islekine
    October 31, 2007
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    This is really cute.

    As one who is well over da hill....I can relate...
    quite well.
    Write on!
    *PEACE*


  • Chevrefeuille
    October 24, 2007
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    Awesome nice poem

    It's a nice poem. I love the sound of it, it paints a wonderful picture. Thank you for sharing.


  • UnchartedPoet
    October 24, 2007

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    Oh I can feel the wishful in this write. How clever and playful. Good write and thanks for sharing your work.

    Jen

  • Bob Fox
    October 24, 2007
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    lol cute

    I love this & the rhyming is great. But we can still make a wish

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