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Full Moon

A round orb of shimmering beauty
Carries a voice so clean and clear
Over star, over water, over sky
She calls to me, leading me here
Draped in light and warmth of heart
Inside the night
My mother sings.

Author notes

Not really sure what this is...you can make up your own mind. Sorry if it sucks, I was half asleep when I wrote it xD Luvs!
Cj

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  • dragonsedge
    January 13, 2008
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    its very true

    see once again you prove me utterly wrong and im glad you did


  • Dlvvanzor
    October 24, 2007

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    Half-asleep poems are often interesting. It produces an image, sis, so all in all I'd say you did just fine. ^^

    Loves,
    -Dlvvanzor


  • Mishi-Ragdoll
    October 24, 2007

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    hmmm maybe you were observing the moon the other day? well i was, i guess you mustve been wathing the moon while i was watching it! awww...*hugs*