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Intoxicated(Monorhyme)

Your beauty makes me blink
Your indifference makes heart sink
No wonder why I drink.

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 27, 2007

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    Very creative and grasping. Love the flow and humour within. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.