with my eyes glazed,
lips questing pink pearls
treasures,
she surrenders
no time,
to blink.
Author notes
prompt; blink
15 sensual words
A contest entry
- A little prompt to help your pen by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 27, 2007, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellent
Great poem. Congrad's on the gold.
Joe -
Wonderful words...Congrats on the gold...You deserved it!
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What a beautiful and enchanting way with words you have. This is divine! Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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well done by a true melter of hearts xx surrendering to a love so true many blessings always xxx
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Dad this is just beautiful, you have the most exquisite way of making short phrases breathtaking, love you always your daughter Josephine
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