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bodily confession

a scant moment

your eye movement
inwardly confesses

you kept your sight
and told nothing

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  • crimsondew
    October 27, 2007
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    Great take...Congrats on the silver


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 27, 2007

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    So deeply thought provoking and grasping! Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.

  • Gott ist tot
    October 24, 2007

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    Interesting snapshot. This was a good short write. Good luck in the contest.
    Thanks for your comment.