balance gone
broken bones or
crimson scrapes
testify
foolish me
I'm embarassed
ageless
complacent despondency
Author notes
slip
A contest entry
- A Quick Poetry Contest VI by -BlackKnight-.
450 points, ended October 25, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANYTHING YOU WANT!! by Freestyle Bushido.
300 points, ended November 9, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very nice poem, You chose the right words to make this a very powerful piece. Thank you for entering.
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i love this one it may have been word limited but it hits my heart
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I can appreciate trying to minimize word usage here, but I got the feeling while reading this that its subject matter is rather vague as a direct result of such short phrasing and so little words used.
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thanks
the challenage was to use only so many words . . that is why . . it is to describe "slip" . . !!
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Quite a sad poem- is it about embarrassment? You used good description and alliteration here. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for your comment.
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ha ha
I didn't use a note for the prompt to make your guess !! . . actually embarassment is part of it . . it is a slip of some type . . a "faux pas" which is embarassing . .
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