Who blinks first loses;
I lost,
His eyes were still on me..
Thus, I win!
A contest entry
- A little prompt to help your pen by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 27, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Proof that some losses are not painful. Hopefully you never win that competition!
But if that were me, they'd probably be staring at that ugly more on the side of my face, lol.
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Congrats on the bronze
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You have certainly spoken volumes within few words here. Love the immense metaphor behind this! Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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This is quite clever, but I bet you wanted to lose this game,
Nice job!
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Good one..Like the contrast presented here..
All the best!
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