Pose
Perfectly curvaceous
Delightfully delicious
Hip bones ascend exquisitely
Tongue teasing naval cavity
Subtle luminescent flesh aglow
Bodies melt together so slow
Darkness befalls from behind
Mind, body and soul intertwined
Faultless balance of light on dark
Curve your back into an arc
Slight shading strategically placed
Hands lovingly around your waist
Complementing one another
Is our love for each other
Author notes
this is for an assignment. the picture i am describing is found at : http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=6050430
Please tell me what you think
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this is so cute and very well put together
i really felt into this intimately and i liked it
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thank you for your words of encouragement
ang
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brilliant
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wow... I love your choice of words as they really capture ones imagination and they paint so many passionate images within. I really like your poem alot and the picture that inspired this piece is perfect. Soft, sensuous, and yet so inviting... you really did a great job writting this piece
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thank you for your wonderful comment, i appreciate it greatly.
Ang.
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Wonderful imagery that comliments the picture perfectly.
Well done
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
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Thank you for your comment Master Ktulu, and thank you so very much for stopping by and reading this, i appreciate it tremendously.
ang
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You did the picture more justice than it deserves, and I like the way that you rhymed in this kind of love poetry, it's something that you don't see as often any more, and when you do see it in love poems it is often also very forced; you may have been a little repetitive with dark, but I think the last two lines of your poem worked really well.
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thank you for stopping by and reading my work, this was written for an assignment as i have mentioned, and the aim thereof was to describe something to the best of my ability before the picture is seen.
Once again, thank you for your wonderful comment.
ang
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This is great, simple, beautiful and packed full of great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
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thank you for stopping by and reading my work Jadestone Doll, it is greatly appreciated.
ang
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Beautiful
Ang, I love it. Your words do indeed describe the sight before my eyes. Your words are beautiful and flow really good. Your rhyme is superb in this also. This is really deep and I loved reading it.
Well done my sis. In my eyes you are still my heroine, the Queen of Erotic Writes.
Wayne
xx
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thank you so much my darling Brother. it was part of an assignment, i had to describe a picture and that is what i did, with my special flair
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ang
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