Arrival of soft bodies;
whitewashed lives buried,
joy and despair raging,
all in a blink.
Author notes
15 words- blink
In a list
A contest entry
- A little prompt to help your pen by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 27, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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good
time can definitely be like that and you're said it well within the confines of the haiku
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Thanks a lot for your lovely comments....But this is not a haiku dear, just a little 15 word poems.I poem short poems.
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How creatively thought provoking and powerful. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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Glad you enjoyed it...
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Our forever is really just a miniscule moment in the overall span of time. Liked the way you brought that forward in these few lines.
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A second of blinking can do lots in our lives....
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Leaves you to ponder the infinity in a blink,
Very unique write,
Well done this is great work,
-Brenden
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That was exactly the intention....
Thank you for your lovely words.
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This is a good take on the propmy thanks for sharing this with me goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love
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glad you liked it...
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