Sleepy blinks after-dark
Dreams walking in the moon-lit canvas
Romancing against the heart
A contest entry
- A little prompt to help your pen by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 27, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So beautiful and enchanting! Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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That's wonderful. I love it. I'm not exactly sure how I can give you proper criticism. I don't see anything wrong with it and I wouldn't change it for the world. If I had more time on my hands I would look at it a little closer. The last line is my favorite. It brings such a beautiful picture to mind.



