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I Blinked.

Shadows flit across me,

Are you there?,

Did I miss you love?,

A split second! 

In a list

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  • littleBritain
    February 17, 2008
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    oh I like this! well done, brief but conveys much!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 27, 2007

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    Within a moment. Creatively expressed!!! Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • Justusdreams
    October 24, 2007

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    If there were a contest for the best four line idea this would be it. I mean it, I liked it a lot. It is such a profound idea that you can miss your love in a split second, just from looking away. Bravo!


  • captain howdy
    October 24, 2007
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    Sometimes a split second is more time than we think! Well done!


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    October 24, 2007

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    I like this. It is very well-written. I love the imagery that this short piece brings. Keep writing.

    Wayne


  • crimsondew
    October 24, 2007
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    Wonderful ..like the uncertainty presented..
    All the best!

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