Shadows flit across me,
Are you there?,
Did I miss you love?,
A split second!
In a list
A contest entry
- A little prompt to help your pen by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 27, 2007, 19 entries
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oh I like this! well done, brief but conveys much!
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Within a moment. Creatively expressed!!! Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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If there were a contest for the best four line idea this would be it. I mean it, I liked it a lot. It is such a profound idea that you can miss your love in a split second, just from looking away. Bravo!
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Sometimes a split second is more time than we think! Well done!
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I like this. It is very well-written. I love the imagery that this short piece brings. Keep writing.
Wayne
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Wonderful ..like the uncertainty presented..
All the best!
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