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Dew on the lawn


starsprinkled grasses
glitter with
dew that dazzles.

At twilight
twirling fayries
spin sweetwebs,
enticing wanderlust.


Author notes

Just so you dont think that I cheated by joining words together - I do it all the time! if you check my other poems, i do it in a lot of them, expecially things in this vein!

So i hope it doesnt count as cheating!

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  • Westley
    October 28, 2007

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    Lovely description! Such sights do fill the natural mind with wanderlust and inspire a faith in our nature.

    I like the simplicity with which you deliver this poem.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 27, 2007

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    How sincerely creative and exceptionally enchanting. Gives of such wondrous imagery. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.