Snapped my neck
looking at you
walk down the street
then Blink,
your my Wife
A contest entry
- A little prompt to help your pen by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 27, 2007, 19 entries
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baw!!!!
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ohh this is adoreable I bet she loves this
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Rheea
Well it was written in an instant.lol
thanks for reading.
Joe
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LOL Yep! hmmmm! think I'll just be quiet this time. Oh, what the hey...a little fortuitous swivel neckin' turned into something a whole lot better! That wink must have been one powerful blink.
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aww..this is sweet, what a wonderful, surprise ending, although that is how it should be, right?
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Love this! I don't even remember our wedding; must have been in Las Vegas.
Love,
Amera♥
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And so it goes ~ A story in few words. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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Good job again here Joe! Short and to the point! Thanks for writing this!!
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lol....Nice one..All the best!
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