Time gone in a flash,
Seconds forgotten...
All that was forever more,
Is never more...
Author notes
Not sure about this but it was funny trying to stay in the 15 word limit considering most of my stuff is about 50 lines long lol
A contest entry
- A little prompt to help your pen by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 27, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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All in a blink ~ so much said in few words. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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Thanks for reading
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short but thought-provoking
nicely written
good luck in the contest..
~rana~
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Thank you very much for the comment
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wow
Yes it was only 15 words (because of the contest) but this must be one of the most moving poems I've ever read, it's weird and might sound starnge but I really loved this poem well done and good luck in the contest! -
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Thanks for reading and for the luck
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