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Forever Never

Time gone in a flash,
Seconds forgotten...
All that was forever more,
Is never more...

Author notes

Not sure about this but it was funny trying to stay in the 15 word limit considering most of my stuff is about 50 lines long lol

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  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    All in a blink ~ so much said in few words. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • Apsinthion
    October 24, 2007

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    short but thought-provoking
    nicely written

    good luck in the contest..

    ~rana~


  • Fading.Heart
    October 24, 2007

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    wow

    Yes it was only 15 words (because of the contest) but this must be one of the most moving poems I've ever read, it's weird and might sound starnge but I really loved this poem well done and good luck in the contest!

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