Dress floats on the wind,
Laughter trickles off the end,
Just a blink...
She's gone.
Author notes
Something very different for me.
In a list
A contest entry
- A little prompt to help your pen by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 27, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very interesting and thought provoking
piece here. It's amazing how things
just vanish right before your eyes.
Great job putting this one together.
Thanks a lot for sharing it here and
keep up the wonderful work!
Jeremy0826 -
Very moving and real. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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Nicely written..Like the flow here.All the best!


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Nicely done for the prompt. Love the thoughts and word choice. Life happens in a blink of an eye...our whole world changes.
Best,
Love
mystic




