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Art

As the writer embed his
hands to a parchment paper.
The reader will be reading
the lines of his palms.
While the muse do her duty.
Of embedding the readers,
between the writer’s nails.

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  • sense surreal
    July 30, 2008
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    such a work of art and the labor of love all rolled into one


  • stavykm gold member
    October 28, 2007
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    I like the way this poem flowed on to prchment paper. Meaning you are the artist and I the reader, But then again it could be the other way around. I like how you expressed in your own words the poets way of writing between the writer's nail. Interesting write. Thank you for sharing with me. Kelle Marie, stavykm


  • Gabrielle28
    October 24, 2007
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    Short, sweet and has a nice flow. Good job.


  • crimsondew
    October 24, 2007
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    I like the flow of words here..It is somehow soothing and true...