Deep within the mirror
my shadowed reflection
haunts me from the other side.
The burning eyes
of a hidden fury
pierce my ice cold soul.
Within the mirror
my pain reaches out
hovering over my weakness.
The darkness looms above
threatening to take me over,
entrapping me within my own hate.
With one hand,
I embrace my insanity.
Author notes
Part one of two. This poem is the "opposite" of Balance. I wrote them together for them to go together. It's a new concept I tried out.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ooh! I love the line, "The darkness looms above threatening to take me over, entrapping me within my own hate." Very nice! Great imagery throughout the whole poem.
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Well, for a new concept, this is perfect. I cant wait to hear the rest of the poem. It has kept me so intruiged. Cant wait to hear it.
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