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Enchanted Prey

Something is there…
In the night,
stalking amongst the shadows
watching with it’s cold eyes.

It’s waiting
to make it’s move,
and give a nasty fright
you could do without.

The song of it’s screams
echo within the darkness.
The wind sounds of cackles
like a child tormenting it’s prey.

The air goes colder,
harder to breathe.
You shudder as if Death himself
is reaching for you.

As you walk,
the night seems to get darker.

From the predators eyes,
The warmth of your blood
within the frosted air
attracts it’s lust.

It approaches you
gliding out from your shadow.
With a twisted smile,
I reach for you.

You recoil with fear and suspicion,
But I do not grab you.
just staring seductively
With that same twisted smile.

Your hand embraces mine,
It’s cold but you aren’t afraid.
Caught in my enchantment
I embrace you.

We dance within
my fantasy world.
Gliding through the air
deeper into my seduction.

The nights light beams upon us
Setting the spotlights
for the final dance.
The tango of lust.

The call of the crimson rose
can no longer be ignored.
I embrace your soul
to kiss your precious life.

My fangs slide into your skin.
My lips warm to your blood,
drinking away your purity.
Slowly, our dance ends.

Within the shadows,
we stalk the night
making it our domain.

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  • allisonxillusion
    October 24, 2007

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    Amazing!

    absolutely amazing! I love it. This is absolutely seductive. coming from me whom loves loves loves vampires and thinks they're sexy as hell. well anyways I love it.


  • Shikamaru-Nara
    October 24, 2007
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    This was different. I don't really have a reaction, but I liked it alot.

    Wondeful write!