Can you hear me?
I can hear you
Your cries echo
Throughout the whole room.
Can you see me?
I can see you
Your tears glisten
Like the stars near the moon.
Can you feel me?
I can feel you
Your cold hands tremble
Throughout the winter noon.
Can you tell me?
I can tell you
Your courage and strength
Makes me admire you.
Can you sense me?
I can sense you
Your radiant sunshine
Means you're coming home soon.
Do you love me?
I love you
The bond we share between us
Is ever-so true.
Author notes
Option 2.
A contest entry
- MY SECOND CONTEST - 3 OPTIONS - PW ALLOWED by X iMPERFECTiON x.
425 points, ended October 24, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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very well written! i very much enjoyed this poem! beautiful write! good luck! =]
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