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Ice Cave

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There’s a cold sharp edge to the night

and I cry from the ache in my feet

frozen in this place of warm currents

that rise to the neckline and cut through a dream

 

I wish I could sleep

deep in the arms of darkness

where hot coals glow from the heat of a bed

sweating from silk skin and cotton

 

But the night is so cold

and the wind slaps against the panes

with it’s sharp bright eyes

shining through the window

 

And I can see the shadows on the wall

dancing in demonic contortions of gray

frantically tracing my dreams

in the palm of the night

 

while I sit

 

with my feet frozen to the floor

and the warm air rising

 

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Author notes

Well, I see pleasuredomes and hear ladies playing dulcimers to demon lovers in this ... kind of like Coleridge meant it anyway ... Xanadu wasn't all it was cracked up to be, remember.


Image: http://arpharazon.deviantart.com/art/Frozen-10833246

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  • just rob gold member
    October 29, 2007
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    Excellent idea

    and carried out so well. Rich with mood and visuals. Congrats!


  • misselaineous
    October 24, 2007
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    no it wasn't
    this is really good
    elaine