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Wicked Smile

sinister eyes light

wicked night fallen tumble

cat licked his paw

 

smiled followed his eyes

dragging his prize into the

happy halloween

 
 
 
 

 

 

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A contest entry

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  • ea silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    Look what the cat dragged in tonight - a jack-o-lantern instead of a mole! I hope she saw the great pumpkin rising in the field...

    • saddie23
      October 6, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given and I'm glad you liked my poem. Saddie23


  • NoWayJo
    October 30, 2007

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    You've drawn lots of great Halloween images into this haiku, Saddie, right down to that black cat washing that clawed-paw!

    Thank you so much for this entry to the contest.  Wishing you a "be-witching" Halloween!



    Jo

    • saddie23
      October 30, 2007
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      Wow

      Thanks for the comments and critiques. And the applaudes are a plus. This was a fun haiku contest and had fun. Saddie23