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sinister eyes light

wicked night fallen tumble

cat licked his paw

smiled followed his eyes

dragging his prize into the

happy halloween

 

 

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  • saddie23
    June 24, 2008
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    thank you

    thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my poem. Saddie23


  • Licinius6790Archias silver member
    June 24, 2008

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    Superb

    A marvelous write indeed. I remember how my cat used to drag his catches into the house, from time to time. I had to rescue several baby birds before they became his dinner. Again, well done.