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A Natural Rock Formation

I've known all along that it would come to an end
I expected it and needed it like yellow leaves need wind
I've known all along that I was just smarter ground
I need something to put a cap on the bottle of life I've found
I won't say goodbye to you because it isn't necessary
I'll still be my true self in you just like I am today

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    A wonderfully penned piece.
    Thanks for sharing, and congrates with the HM.

    Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Samantha Mula
    November 9, 2007

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    Wonderfully smart and packed with power.I'm sure you have a pretty good appreciation for life! Thank you for your entry, it is a pleasure to read.


  • Trixie08
    October 24, 2007

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    Beautifully written! I love it, it felt as if you wrote it just for me and no one else. lol! But, I'm not that vain. Great Work.