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Suffereing

Vile, sad, painful suffering
inside soul...
Joy like rarefied air
turns into a torment.

A fantasy to sew
However, suffers! hidden -
Obstinate, insist,
lament...

Sadness consumes
Pinches hearing that name
To cause me such miseries...

Weeping....writing these verses
Feeling - she..not - so being
The suffering is eternal, every day...

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  • PerfectImperfection
    October 24, 2007

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    So painfully expressed! Great depth of thought woven throughout! Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!