when you touch me
i feel whole
whole in the sense of knowing everything i want
finding everything to know
i grasp at the thought
holding onto your hand
you will take me to our own version of never never land
you buy me flowers
you write me prose
pretty words for a pretty girl you say
you are beautiful
your soul white with the pureness of you
your eyes make my heart skip a beat
there's nothing to deep to say
i feel this way
i share all, everything of me, everything i have
you are everything i want to be
you reach deep down and come out smiling
you are my shining night, moonlight and bright
you are a rainy day, that takes all my worries away and lets them fall
you make me forget it all.....
drifting my brain sinks, my heart only matters now
A contest entry
- Love's true Meaning by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
360 points, ended October 31, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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A very enjoyable and inspiring work. I like these lines the best.
when you touch me
i feel whole
whole in the sense of knowing everything i want
finding everything to know
Good luck in the contest.

