Oh my heart is fill with joy
to see all my love ones
around me during my final hour
and now my darlings
before God takes my breath
I will tell you where to find
a precious treasure
that I have kept hidden for years
just to give you as inheritance.
The map and directions are kept,
(cough), kept, (cough).....
(What fun is dying
if you can't leave them
with a practical joke
they'll never forget?)
A contest entry
- Famous Last Words by Trixie08.
300 points, ended November 7, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent.
This appeals to my wicked side, very much.
Cough, cough in the dog yelp yelp cough cough Basket
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You are such a trip..
I'm not sure what to make of this...
But brother, you rock!
Congrates on the HM.
Peace, Timothy
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Thank you for the wonderful comment Timothy
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This is a very sad poem and it's the first to have been written towards loved ones and that alone makes this one stand above the rest and it was written with alot of emotion which i could feel when i read it. Thank you for entering and best of luck.
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Thank you for the wonderful commment.
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