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I didn't want to tell you

It's only best that you know something.

That I've tried my best to keep going.

I wasn't here for the fun,
Or the parties,
Or the crotchless underwear.

"I was here to make sure you were happy..."

"And I think you should know..."




"You talk in your sleep."

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=D Mon amore desirez...




AMORE!

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    Very humourous, and meaningful at the same time.
    Thanks for sharing, and keep up the great works.

    -Timothy


  • Trixie08
    October 24, 2007
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    You really got me with the last line I was expecting a confession but, you talk in your sleep? That was too funny and I love your humorous take on the contest. I think it took some good thought and creativity. Thank you so much for entering and best of luck.