Lean in close, I'm too weak
It hurts to die, you know
Though, I wont ever tell
Find out yourself
Thats the secret to dying
Just lean right here, close as you can
Thats it
Now please, by the mercy of god, tell me
"Did you turn off the water in the the bath?"
Author notes
I'd most likely say something smart ass or completely irrelevant.
Most likely, "Shit" but, you said no swearing.
A contest entry
- Famous Last Words by Trixie08.
300 points, ended November 7, 2007, 10 entries
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This one is very funny, and it takes humor to make it through life, as well as death I'm sure. Everyone is a bit different.. but this here is a trip. Thanks for sharing.
-Timothy
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Of course. Thank you for reading ^^
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I loved how you started out as this sad emotion about dying, and then towards the middle with some knowledge of dying and then for the kill with did you turn off the water. I thought that was too funny and I loved how it pieced itself together. Thank you for the great read.
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lol..great....
All the best!
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XD! XD! XD!
<3
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