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trying to figure out what you said (without reading too much into it)

you keep saying the most bizarre things
and i don't really know how to respond to them
like today
we were walking
and you sounded so sad
when you talked about
how lonely
you are
and i completely understood
every word
and i knew what you meant
because i live it everyday
but i'm so confused
i don't know how to reply
because i thought you were beyond that
i thought you'd turned from that
i thought you were waiting until after college
to explore
that avenue
of life
now i don't know what to think

//lonely
i am so lonely
i have nobody for my own//

and i completely understand
but i wouldn't let you be lonely
i'd comfort you
but i need to know how
and to understand
you must stop confusing me

Author notes

bah; this is lame. but um...what i'm thinking about. its more of a stream of consciousness than a poem. its a terrible poem, but it is my thought process at the moment.

bah.

boys.

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  • Arycan
    October 24, 2007
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    very sad but true you are not alone with feelings of loneliness.