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The Pond

Watching the ripples on the pond
The sun a painted setting tint
Lowering itself behind the trees
Hiding from the Moon's show
The sunny reflection of me
My face as I looked into
The murky clear water
Golden orange fish swam
Quickly by as if playing some game
I sat on the green grass
Under a weeping willow
It's crying leaves swept
Gently across my cheek
As I sat thinking of my life
Reminiscing about my friends
And everything good you can see
And everything good you can touch
All these thoughts ran through
Swimming intently into my mind

While I listened closely

To the chirping of the crickets

Watching the water bugs on the pond's surface

I looked across it's softened waters

To the old broken down millhouse

Watching as almost in a trance

The hypnotizing affect of the waterwheel

Spinning slowly round and round

Round and round, water flowing

The wind kissed me " Good Evening"

As a flock of Mallards

Took off for the South

I sat taking every inch in

The fresh air filling my lungs

I stood up as the moon appeared

And headed through the purple field

As chipmunks and squirrels ran home

I headed  down the gravel path

Back to my own.  

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I described a place I know quite well. I hope it shows.
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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    October 26, 2007

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    thanks for inviting me bevy.. i did a poem on weeping willows and mallards.. so i love all these images. even the crickets cheeping away.. you are quite a poet arn't you,,you improve every day a joy to read,, xxxpp best of luck as well






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    • Beverlynohime
      October 26, 2007
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      PETER! :D

      Your welcome! ^-^ Thanks for reading it...yeah I recalled you had a poem like that..so I thought you'd enjoy it. Or relate to it at the very least. lol
      Aww you're too sweet. ^_^ *hugs*


  • She burns
    October 24, 2007

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    Oh serenity here, that place, beauty and comfort, such times, we enjoy and cherish, somehow we find peace there, everyone needs some place to go, a plce that makes us happy...


  • faded dreams
    October 24, 2007

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    Very well done! Yes it seems you know the place well. However, even if this was a place you had made up I'd be able to close my eyes and see it. This is beautiful! Good luck in my contest.


    • Beverlynohime
      October 24, 2007
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      Thanks! ^_^ Nope this place really exists. ^-^ although I have made up some places in other poems I have similar to this.

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