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Blurry

eyes widen to capture rays of light
pupils dilate with all their might
the end of the world, you had said
but I reminded you not to think ahead

suddenly this smog of unfortunates
choking, strangling, seeping our breaths
they staggered, swaying, to-and-fro
the trees, strong but somehow incapable

you laughed, closing the blinds again
your humor was all but sick & demented
many restless nights, nightmares come true
and every morning I have to spend with you

Author notes

This is something like; love impairs your judgment, resembling a fog. And in the morning, the woman realizes how unhappy she is with this man.

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  • Grunts Girl gold member
    October 23, 2007
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    thank you for your entry


    • Ebyru
      October 23, 2007
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      wow.

      I wasn't expecting such a fast reply. lol.

      thank you for challenging me =)
      [bows]