My body has become a hollow shell,
Of lifelessness and nothingness
While my spirit and soul,
Watch from a distance
My body is crumbling
I feel as if I am not complete
As if part of me is missing
I just don't know what part
My heart may be laying in my chest,
Beating,
But the love that once lay
In my heart is now gone
Along with my spirit and soul
I am now left with
Only a hollowed shell
That used to be my body
That won't do me any good
Without a soul inside it
Author notes
I got the idea for this from a quote my friend JP had said, "My body is a hollow shell and my soul is outside it". My ideas just went from there
Tell Me What You Think Good or Bad.
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I know you meant good for this poem. Since you meant good you should always spell check your writes. I'm not going to point out your mistakes i'm sure you can do that for yourself. Besides the fact I like it. I dont know what happened to my lil loving girls cousin, she is now writing dark poems, have you taken my place? lol.
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