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Suduce my mortal soul.

Bend me over

In an artistic pose

Capture my naked body

Upone a lifless pice of paper



Scrible and doodle

My sole's elegant  existance

capture my mind

And show me who I am



Stare deep into my shimmering skin

Study every detail

Praise my beauty

Ahh at my heart



Touch me and tease me

Make me want more

Teach me how to trust again

Then RAPE my mortal soul.

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  • alco
    October 24, 2007
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    Michael,
    I really like this poem...it's very erotic. However, being a survivor of incest, and my daughter being a victim/survivor of incest and rape, I could really have done without the use of the word "rape" in all caps...JMO...
    Other than that, great write, my poet friend.
    Much Love,
    ~Monica