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First, Last And Only (A Double Acrostic)

Forever you will have my heart, your love is what it’s made of.
It’s as if your love rushed over me like the waves of a tsunami.
Rushing mad through every vein of my being like a raging river.
Stars shimmered within your gaze each time I was lost in your eyes.
Time ceased to exist in each other’s arms even if only for a moment.

Lovers so truly meant to be together when two hearts met and fell.
An intense longing desire between us that burned like liquid lava.
Souls were captured by the truest love the night of our first kiss.
That was the first time I knew the very depths of my own heart.

Another love will never compare to you my beautiful Tina.
Never before you was I in love, and never will I be again.
Destined to me forever when my heart your love completed.

Over oceans of sadness I wait listening for your soft voice to echo.
Now there’s just a memory, and wishes that one day you’ll return.
Lost in the only true love my heart has ever known or ever will. 
You are the very love of my life and my heart's first, last and only.

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  • penman gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    excellent

    What an amazing creation. so very well done. Congrats on your trophies. They are very well deserved.


  • Desire gold member
    May 3, 2008
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    Thank You!!

    Wonderful Your piece qualifies and elated to see You backBest wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • Desire gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    Thank You!

    Thank You for Your entry: First, Last and Only (A Double Acrostic)

    Wonderful form You have chosen and I must say a difficult one to do plus still keep the energy flow within each line
    I have tried this type of Acrostic...
    You made this look so easy~~
    The images with deep emotions of passionate Love woven within Your words
    You bring the reader right there to experience the touch of Your Heart also Spirit

    Loved these lines:
    Lovers so truly meant to be together when two hearts met and fell.
    An intense longing desire between us that burned like liquid lava.
    Souls were captured by the truest love the night of our first kiss.
    That was the first time I knew the very depths of my own heart.

    Magnificent verse You have penned~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Judging will be done shortly
    Many blessings to You in our Group contest
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Tszeto
    October 28, 2007
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    OH MAN... sick poem man. thanks for commenting on my poem, I appreciate it.


  • Jonathan ROBIN
    October 25, 2007

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    A cross tick acrostic

    A Controlled Response Offered Simply To Incite Curiosity
    Actively Calls Reply Open Sourced, To Invite Complicity
    As Creativity Releases One’s Subtle Thoughts Indicts Comformity


    A play on words, from alpha to omegA
    Conditions mind-sets through techniques linguistiC
    Revealing fresh allusions which ajaR
    Open the nervous floodgates of the egO.
    Simplicity at times appears just tacticS,
    Too difficult, confusing, which restricT
    Inspired trick interactions which the ‘I’
    Creates to coin illusions in a cross tiC !


  • Gods-Artgal
    October 25, 2007
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    This is a great poem.


  • onesugar gold member
    October 25, 2007
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    WOW!
    I clicked here because I like acrostics and wanted to know what a double one was all I can say is amazing.
    what I read I can relate too as I am going through exactly the same feeling of losing a love like no other. A well written double acrostic full of emotion.
    ~sugar~


    • DrkPoet
      October 25, 2007
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      Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed they can be hard trying to get the right words to match on both begining and end but once you get the hang of it they're great!!


  • faderman1959
    October 24, 2007

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    Very cool! I have written one of these myself a while ago so I know how tough they can be! Great job!


  • Bee gee silver member
    October 23, 2007

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    deep emotion

    you are showing deep emotion for this person. a love like no other she is your heart and soul.forging deep with in yourself you discovered true love. very nice poem. i have no points to add smilys but il prentend clap.

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