Passionate love where DNA met DNA,
my little body was formed.
Mother, you carried my 6'6lbs
for 9 months and were sick
every step of the way.
I remember the time you made
me really mad and I told you
I hated you; I later went
downstairs to find you crying.
I didn't mean that, I was
young and couldn't control myself.
Dad, I remember sitting
in your arms when I was
really little and I felt like
nothing in the world
could ever hurt me.
You always wanted me to
go to Georgia with you
and I would have just to
spend some time with you, why
do you think I always wanted
to go to your boring office with you?
I love you both more than
words will ever be able to express.
There isn't enough gold or riches
in the world to ever repay
you for what you gave to me.
No matter what happens, know this:
I will always love you and I will
always be your little girl.
Author notes
I really do love them with all my heart!!
A contest entry
- show me love for your parents by wings from god 28.
300 points, ended October 24, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dedication by poetrysheartbreak.
450 points, ended November 5, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A wonderful dedication to 2 of the most important people in any persons life. I love the feel and tone of this piece. But I would give it a quick proof read for there were a few typos.
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Eeek thanks! I didn't catch those before when I proofread!!!
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great job
i can feel the love you have for your parents great job keep wrighting
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Awww this is sweet I hope you print this off for them
.How precious.Goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love
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