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Open Secrets(Monorhyme)

Although you try hard to hide your love for me
It will not work for my darling everyone can see
In your eyes, in your smile, the euphoria, the ecstasy
Forever and ever to all, open your secrets will be

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  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    October 24, 2007
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    So very well done here. Thank you for entering and good luck in the judging. La x


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 23, 2007
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    A daring monorhyme--love the rhythm and good luck in the contest!