Blindfolded, kneeling, vulnerable in your nakedness.
You shudder as the rope falls around your neck.
A tinge of fear mixed with exhilaration.
You know that I can do anything.
Tactile sense comes alive as the rope snakes around your body.
Trying to follow the pattern I weave, you soon lose the thread.
Your focus fixed on the rope running sensually over your skin.
The bondage forms a protective covering, you're lulled into a false sense of security.
Slowly you relax, your mind lets go. Feeling safe, you drift into sub-space.
Quickly, expertly, I weave your arms tightly together behind your back.
Security gone, you know that I have just begun.
Revelling in the tightness of the bonds; pain, pleasure become as one.
You become acutely aware that your only desire has been fulfilled:
You are Mine.
24 October 2007
Author notes
Picture Prompt 10 - 15 lines
A contest entry
- Adults only (sorry! haven't had one of these for a while now) by Tattboyspet.
800 points, ended October 30, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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sub-space...
takes just the right thing to get into, but once there... there are no words for that. a true moment, one of sheer peace when your will just goes and ye trust to the One holding the other end of the rope.. knoweing that aye, they can deliver such pain but also... your release. and whilst anticipation and fear are part of it all, trust, understanding and peace comes too. oh my, thoes three words, can bring such heat to the skin and wetness betewwn the thighs. well written... one could say masterful realy.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment arden. It is obvious that you understand from experience the beauty and peace of submission and sub-space
Trust comes from understanding, which comes from getting to know your partner. Peace comes from letting go, which can only happen when trust has been established. It is an incredible circle that then allows the dominant to take you on journeys to amazing places!
I know both the submissive and the Dominant roles. I started out many years ago as a submissive, however I have been an active dominant now for several years and cannot imagine submitting again! It would take a VERY strong dominant to make me submit!!
I also get hugely turned on from domming - very wet definitely!!
I am so glad that you enjoyed this piece.
Love
Moira
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Well Done
Congratulations on Your silver trophy Mistress, I loved this piece from the start.
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Thank you my sweet. I am thrilled with this silver. I also liked this one
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There are as many kinds of Master as their are people. The ropes are mere symbols made real. The drama is in the training and perfecting. The slave is always a reflection of the Master. Nicely written piece. Congrats on the Silver.
Love, Tom B.
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I agree Tom. There are as many ways to do BDSM as there are people doing it - it is all in the mind of the Master/Mistress and slave. for me the ropes act on many levels - one of which is the symbolic
I totally agree that the 'drama is in the training and perfecting'. This is where the game truly unfolds. I really love your thinking as a Master.
Thank you for your applause and comment. I'm really glad that you enjoyed this write. Your comments mean so much to me, as I respect and enjoy your work so highly.
Love,
Moira
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that is truley wonderful
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Thank you so much for the comment. I am so glad that you enjoyed this write.
Regards
Moira
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I am YOURS
I love these three lines:
Revelling in the tightness of the bonds; pain, pleasure become as one.
You become acutely aware that your only desire has been fulfilled:
You are Mine.
This one really gives the reader an understanding of bondage and how pain can be absolute pleasure.
Well Done Mistress
Your sl
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Thank you so much my sweet. I thought you may relate to those last three lines in particular It is one of the most beautiful qualities that separates the true slave from the submissive - not merely a desire to submit, but the constant desire to be owned completely by their Mistress/Master. I am in awe of this - it is so very beautiful. My desire to own you grows in proportion to your desire to be owned. This is a very special relationship that we have and I do feel blessed to be in it with you. Thank you for everything you give me my love.
Your Mistress
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Lovely! Although, I beg to differ - "you're lulled into a false sense of security." - it could NEVER be false when with a Master/Mistress
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Thank so much C. I am glad that you enjoyed this write. I know what you mean - the security that a slave feels with their Master/Mistress certainly isn't false, UNLESS the Master decides to play with the slave's mind, letting them relax, thinking they know where the Master is going, then jolting the slave into a realisation that things aren't as they seemed at all and the Master has taken them off in a completely different direction. It is in this sense that I used this idea. The mind game often has twists and turns where the slave's "sense of security" is lost momentarily as the Master plays his mental tricks on them. I hope that this makes sense now
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I guess, but then again the trust is so deep that no matter where He/She wanted to go, the slave would follow eagerly
lol - hey, i'm only speaking from what i feel, so ~shrug~
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Awesome
Very nice piece of work. I absolutely loved it. Such vivid imagery.. It's definitely great to join this site and see others interested in the same things as myself. Wonderful job...
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Thank you so much for your generous comment. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this piece. You are right. It is always wonderful when one can find like-minded people and on this site there is a decent sized BDSM community - happiness I am especially glad that you have found us and I look forward to reading your work in the future. Why don't you consider joining the group "Erotic Mistresses Masters slaves and pets". You will meet us all there!
Thanks again.
Love,
Moira
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This is awesome. So is this real? I think so if I read between the lines accurately. Your words, as always, really shows the depth of this type of relationship. You did really well and I can see this happening. Wonderful writing as always.
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Thank you for your comment g. I'm thrilled that you liked this piece - your appreciation always means so much to me! Yes, you are right, this is very real. I am in a relatively new Mistress/slave relationship with a woman whom I dearly love. Those months with you staying here sowed a seed of need in me, I guess! They were good months in which I learnt so much about what a slave was all about, as well as how to write poetry ... amongst many other things!
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Wow, you just blew me away!! Thank you. I never realised I guess, but I learned a lot from you too. Thank you for giving me so much of yourself in that time too. I will never ever forget it. Oh yes, yes there is a second one. My hubby and Master has some wonderful intuition...
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