treasures scattered
along the floors
spilling from open mouths
of our dearest so implores
ugly words long scince thrown about
lovers sentiment lost over ages of war
stirred up mind of mistrusing doubt
evade all ravenous inquiries
enclose secretive words
within diaries
Author notes
diamond like 40 word quikie! from a word prompt... as it does not fit with the picture. enjoy as it's meant for you.
A contest entry
- PIF 10/40 by Laura Lamarca.
400 points, ended October 24, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
well give it to me straight
Comments
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I love it. Well worded Visara.
Silvos.
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So very well done here. Thank you for entering and good luck in the judging. La x
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