the sun's flames
so full of:
passion,
longing,
lust
patiently waiting
for the moon
to pass by
but the moon
doesn't always
come around
no not at all
infact it only
is seen
by the sun
once and only once
during an eclipse
now when the moon
comes close
during that time
it still
isn't close enough
they are still
very far apart
[[[[They are only close during an eclipse]]]]
for a few mere moments
****more like seconds, really****
then the moon flees
without even
a single goodbye
and never returns
now you see...
the sun
is left in:
confussion,
sadness,
despair,
greif,
self-pity,
and loneliness
and it's
gasoline filled tears
engulf its already
massive flames
and EXPLODES
and all of it's "ashes"
are scattered
around the universe
slowly being collected
and formed
into a new sun
which takes its place
in the solar system
as the old one
once did
and the moon comes around
once and only once
[[[[They are only close during an eclipse]]]]
$$$$$!!!!!now here's the sad part of this little story.
it is actually pretty true. it symbolizes one person's love for another. now love,you see, doesn't really last forever 'cuz it can end in a second. so make the best of it. you find someone who really means it. the one who won't leave you when they see someone else. you'll never forget your first love, you know. but you also will never forgive them either. you'll thank them 'cuz you'll see that you were better off without them in the end.$$$$$!!!!!
did it make any sense?
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I love your message in this...its very beautiful though sad...its how we break away and live for ourselves...you can never expect someone to be happy with you let alone love you 100%...though there are exceptions rarly...anyways...your description and imagery was amazing...very thought provoking and a great write...amazing job
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jaded teardrop
don't worry, it did make sense. you rambled on a little in the middle, but other then that, it was really good!!!
It was beautiful, and had a lot of great imagery...
you are a good writer, you just need to write more...
good luck and keep writing!!
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Wow
That's great
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love it!
very nice...
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thats a god analogy of love ^^
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OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG,
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WoNdErFuL
beautiful, touching, i loved it blair.
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