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Some

Some are stupid
Some are sad
Some just seem to be missing cupid
Some are interesting
Some are not
Some I wish to boil in a pot
Some I get
Some I don't
Some I just leave to sit
Some strike home
Some I miss
Some I believe to be covered in chrome
Some are true
Some hit you
Some remind me of feeling blue

Some you'll like
Some you won't
The ones you don't stick on a spike
The ones you like give them flight

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  • xButterfly Sx
    May 12
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    great poem=)

    i really like this poem, its to the point and i love the last 4 lines!
    very unique Great work x


  • Quabben
    November 20, 2008

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    Good Write

    Yep sometimes poetry is simple and sometimes difficult but it never fails to mean something and perhaps different somethings to the readers.

  • davidwright silver member
    October 22, 2008
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    An interesting look at those around us brief and to the point. I enjoyed the read. Happy trails


  • Dienush
    November 18, 2007

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    This is interesting, it's a new style to me. The repetition works well particularly because some of the things you say are not quite common. The lines "Some I get it" and "The ones you like give them flight" sort of confuse me. I think leaving "it" and "them" out might do the trick, but I'm not quite sure that's how you meant it. This is a very complex poem. Pretty good. Keep writing

    ~Diana


    • Edited
      November 18, 2007
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      thanks for the comment, the points you pointed out were grammar faults and that i have changed thanks. the bases of this poem was about poems, how i see my own writing and what i think. i feel every one has their way of interpreting them and this is what i felt.

      Thanks agin a million you have saved me some humiliation


  • PoPtArTpRiNcEsS
    October 30, 2007
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    OK THESE ARE ALMOST TO GOOD TO BE YOURS!!!! I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THEM HOW COOL!!!


    • Edited
      October 30, 2007
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      Thanks

      thnks for the comment.
      was just reading through some of my earlier works and these are the thoughts i had


  • Sachiro k-Saruto
    October 23, 2007
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    hey man....remember me?

    looks like im your first commenter. i like the way that you used "some" to start out each line, it really made it interesting. keep writing things like this and you'll be great someday!! have you thought about writing songs? you should.....i know i'd like to see a song pop up here soon!!

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