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Greens!

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I don't want to eat those peas,

They look like someone's sneeze,

All green and round,

On the plate in a mound,

I'm not gonna eat those peas,

 

I'm not gonna eat that rice,

It really doesn't look nice,

It sits next to the meat,

And smells like dads feet,

There's no way I'm eating that rice,

 

I don't like cauliflower,

It's crunchy, nasty and sour,

It's as solid as rock,

And tastes like old sock,

I really hate cauliflower,

 

I'm supposed to eat up my greens,

So I'll be healthy when I get to my teens,

I don't care what they say,

No veggies, No way,

I'll happily live on baked beans!

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  • Piccola gold member
    August 13

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    Eat every carrot and pea on your plate lmao. too bad you don't like veggies they are good for you. thank you for the sweet entry.
  • whoopie.x
    April 12

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    CONGRATS ON HONERABE MENTION. I LIKED YOUR POEM IT IS VERY FUNNY. REMEMBER THAT THE SENTENCES SHOULD MAKE SENCE. REMEMEBER TWO VOWELLS CAN'T BE NEAR EACH OTER. THAT MISTAKE IS IN 3rd PARAGRAPH AND 3rd sentence. good luck in the contest

  • Melodies silver member
    October 25, 2007

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    I love the way this repeats its thoughts!

    So filled with horrible foods that I actually like (haha) and I love the repetition. What fun! Thank you for bringing this darling poem to our yucky foods contest!