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The Girls' Gossip

Whisper whisper~

hush hush~

undentified words

hush hush~

whisper whisper~

Quiet when the teacher looks

whisper whisper!

hush, hush!

Nobody is looking

let's talk about

all the things we did.. today

We'll talk about boys

and the latest fashion

I'll tell you what I think of him..

I'll tell you what's bad for you..

We'll party..all night

We'll drink and ahve bitch fights..

We'll forget everything..

we'll talk about anything..

whisper whisper~

hush hush~

Nobody will tell...

Hush hush~

whisper whisper~

Some don't even know...

whisper!

Hush!

Whisper!

Hush!

S...i....l....e...n...c...e

whisper hush~

whisper hush~

Who knows.. what they're talkin' about...

who knows.. what they're gonna do....

Specifically..

I.. just wanna know..

Just wanna expose them..

let's put on a 'show'...

We wanna know.. what they're sayin'...

we wanna know the truth..

Do you really think of us..

or are we thinking of you..

The class goes quiet..

notes are goin' around..

then..

the teacher..

looks..

around.

Busted.

And notes are cleaned from the room...

notes are read.. by whom...?

what do they say..

are they about you...?

Do you think..

someone..

Love...... you...?

Do you think.. they are talking about....you..

do all the girls... gossip about... us

Do they... need a friend...?

It's too bad.. we're gettin' older..

Nobody.. has a boyfriend or girlfriend

Guess we'll look for someone else..

someone who doesn't know us..

they'll talk

they'll walk

and then.. just leave us alone..

And the only people..

who care about us....

are the girls and boys

who grew up together..

who knew each other..

forever~~~

whisper

whisper

hush

Hush.

 

 

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  • Terry Collett
    October 10, 2008
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    Yes, good poem.

    I guess we are or were guilty of this at sometime in our lives and this captured well.


  • Learning2PaintYou
    October 9, 2008

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    I like the dramatic and sarcastic tone of this poem. You seem to be mocking the girls in a sarcastic way and I love it! Girls that gossip drive me nuts more than anything!

    I particularly like the line, "notes are read.. by whom...?" If a gossip-girl were to read this it would kind of throw that back in her face and say, "Haha. You and your little chick friends aren't the only ones that read your notes."

    Your grammar is a little off, but overall I think you have a great poem here.


  • Subtle Rains
    August 25, 2008
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    very good dramatization in this poem inserting sound into it.


  • LittleMissFaith
    July 15, 2008

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    i really enjoyed this poem.
    i've thought this so many times.
    also guilty of whispering and note passing on occassion
    but this is so true.
    great write, keep it up!


  • Fallen Hard
    July 8, 2008

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    love it

    My favorite lines are
    Do you think..

    someone..



    Love...... you...?


    Do you think.. they are talking about....you..

    do all the girls... gossip about... us

    Do they... need a friend...?



    It's too bad.. we're gettin' older..

    Nobody.. has a boyfriend or girlfriend


    Guess we'll look for someone else..

    someone who doesn't know us..

    they'll talk

    they'll walk


    and then.. just leave us alone..


    And the only people..

    who care about us....

    are the girls and boys


    who grew up together..

    who knew each other..


    forever~~~


    whisper

    whisper

    hush



    Hush.

    Thats a young poet
    Fallen Hard


    • MagicaI
      July 8, 2008
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      hehe, thanks

      thanks for commenting, it brings me back about.. 275 days earlier LOL it was just a feeling that came to me when I just got a bit frustrated about all the whispering and all the notes being passed around.. it just seems like you want to read them, but then you really don't want to get caught holding the note when the teacher turns around again, thanks for leaving a comment!


  • The Black Poet
    July 7, 2008

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    this poems is long but that's kinda necassary for it though. This is really good anyway, i liked it a lot.
    adios amigo,
    TBP


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 2, 2008

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    Oh the days of whispering

    You have brought back many memories of childhood.And also memories of how hurt I felt when kids would whisper and look my way and laugh .It may not have been about me but I felt it was and it hurt my feelings .From then on I didnt whisper and I was taught if I couldnt say something good about someone not to say anything at all . Be careful and have fun


  • theused14
    December 13, 2007

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    This poem is very long and it kinda seems like a song to me but, it is VERY good.


  • swimgirl1996
    November 28, 2007
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    wow good one


  • Bourne Darkness
    November 24, 2007

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    wow

    this is sooo true, and yet, often ignored....wonderful work here, i applaud your ability to reach to the reality of life, and grasp every concept of social gossip. congratulations on your job well done.


  • deliciousjay23
    November 1, 2007
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    like

    nice diis is good veryy longg. lol


  • MagicaI
    October 31, 2007
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    kewl

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