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[ beware the stare of mary shaw ]

beware the stare of mary shaw
she had no children
only dolls
if you see her in your dreams
you should never ever scream
or she will rip your tongue out at the seam
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1,2...he's coming for you

3,4...better lock your door

5,6...pick up hachets

7,8...stay up late

9,10...never sleep again

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somethings i heard on movies

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  • Dylan-Moran
    April 2

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    Excellent

    I would give you three claps...but i only have two free left...and excellent poem...are you familiar with the soundtrack to the movie?...Aiden have an awesome song there...you are a truly gifted writer...


  • PastelMoons gold member
    December 31, 2008

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    I love your reference to dolls
    as they are so very creepy
    This was a delight to read
    I enjoyed the macabre imagery
    Darkly delicious
    Love it!
    ~Pastel


  • xdead-silencex
    December 23, 2008
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    thats realyl good.....and creepy....i love it

  • Dark The Poet
    August 19, 2008

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    Never sleep again.

    This must have been a good movie, but I want to meet your mind and process.  Do not judge yourself by anyone. What is purely you is purely true. Be free!
    Dark


  • Bohemianwriter
    November 29, 2007

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    GREAT! THE 10 STEPS I LIVE BY!

    lmaoo, a great poem to match such a great movie!!....try coming up with something of your own tho, im sure u can do it...i have the talent to do so...


  • emo-freak
    October 23, 2007
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    GOOD

    yes barbie-beat down, she stated that but thats okay cause i think shes gifted anyways.


  • Barbie-BeatDown
    October 23, 2007
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    COPIER! u copied this off of a movie


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 23, 2007
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    This is Great Keep up the Good Work

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