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Unintentional Love

I never meant to fall for you
You were only supposed to be a friend
A brother even
But nothing more
But as time went by I found
That every chance I got
To be around you
I took it with out
A moments hesitation
Being this close to you
Shouldnt feel this good
Looking in your eyes
Shouldnt be this addictive
And the feel of your touch
Shouldnt make it this hard to breathe
But it does
Looking back and remembering
All the times we talked
I never realized
Just how nervous I really was
Or just how much I was trembling
And when I am away
I just cant stop thinking about you
But I should be able to
I never meant to fall for you
But I did
And now
I am trapped
In an unintentional love...
...And I dont want out

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  • Papers
    February 14, 2008

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    I can't believe I never commented on this. Ugh. Anyway, I loved this poem! I loved the part "Looking in your eyes, Shouldn't be this addictive." I found myself in that one line. Another great write, my good friend!


  • cloe009
    January 8, 2008

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    it is amazing

    it so much like what i used to feel for this guy that i knew i think you have out done yourself it was good.


  • Scop Christiana
    December 7, 2007
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    this is really good. i like the emotion just spilling out and saying "hey, this is how i feel so deal with it" well, maybe not exactly but maybe you get what i mean, then again you may not. either way its a great poem and you should never stop writting for you have talent


  • hidingintheshadows9
    December 5, 2007
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    woooooooooooooow.

  • hidingintheshadows9
    December 5, 2007
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    haha yess i can =PP

  • hidingintheshadows9
    December 5, 2007
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    can i comment myself....?

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