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Nature's Masterpiece

 

dazzling colors

immersed in brilliance

suspend me

in a rainbow trance

I gaze in wonder

struck

by nature's masterpiece

A contest entry

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  • Tattboyspet
    March 14, 2008

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    An amazing dedication to something that can be awe-inspiring ... cannot decide which is my favourite part, hence I shall say that the entire write reads superbly!
    well done!


  • Touchof1der silver member
    October 24, 2007

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    Looking at the image at great length and reading your well thought out words here, I would say you have captured the feeling one gets perfectly when viewing such a display of nature. Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to you in the contest. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • UnchartedPoet
    October 24, 2007
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    Good write and best of luck in the contest.

    Jen


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    October 23, 2007
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    beautiful words that came from your pen!!!