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The Death of Love

Back to back they lie,
Two beings seperated.
In the hours just past
They sat and ate together,
Embraced in the others arms
On the couch to watch TV,
and walked through the rain together.

Back to back they lie,
both to stubborn to speak.
Just as a summer's rain,
they both turn and smile
into the others eyes enflamed.
In the middle warm lips meet
Fanning the coals within.

Now chest to chest as one
and united in one creature.
A soft touch brings waves of pleasure,
By almost silent sounds.
Known only to the knight,
Both secretly retire to their instincts.
Heaven's firey passion condemns both.

Author notes

My word choice was delicate. There are no misplaced words, and each word in there is there for a reason.

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  • Vampireatheart
    October 23, 2007
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    Very Good

    That was very good you should make it longer but it was good
    Ace