It has been years since we seen each other.
Our love parting even further.
What used to be love is now is gone.
Like all the birds leaving a pond.
Now we are just friends and nothing more than that.
I'm just stating a fact,
that its over and there is nothing you can do about it.
Cause we will never fit.
Even if you say we do,
but my love won't to you.
Author notes
I thought it was funny at the end. hope you like it. arigato
A contest entry
- 15 lines or less... by xTomorrowx.
450 points, ended October 26, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hiya....tell me what you think please...
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i like it very much, one slight problem, in the third line "What used to be love is now is gone." you've written 'is' twice, but other than that i think its a brilliant poem, thanks heaps for entering and good luck! =)
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What used to be love is now is gone.
Like all the birds leaving a pond.
Good poem those are my favorite lines good luck in the contest
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